The diagram showsthe life process of the silkworm and the steps in the manufacturing of silk material

Essay topics:

The diagram showsthe life process of the silkworm and the steps in the manufacturing of silk material.

The graphic illustrate the life process of the silk worm and the phases in the manufacturing of silk material.

Overall, the life cycle of the silkworm is a natural process consists of four steps starting from laying the eggs and ending with a new mode from cocoon. On the other hand man made procedure involves to produce a silk cloth.

The life of cyclic process begins with laying eggs after 10 days the silkworm larvae comes out of the eggs which feed on mulberry leaves. The larva get silk thread on their back after 4-6 weeks of hatching. In the 3-8 days the cocoon made and a new merge and the process and begin again.

The first state of the production of silk cloth is to selected dark cone and a boil it in the water. After boiling unwinding the thread which is about 300 to 900 m in length. Twist the unwinded thread and weave the threads and dye the silk cloth. The silk cloth is ready.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...duce a silk cloth. The life of cyclic process begins with laying eggs after 10...
^^
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...hich feed on mulberry leaves. The larva get silk thread on their back after 4-6 wee...
^^^
Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d dark cone and a boil it in the water. After boiling unwinding the thread which is a...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40476190476 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1371617434 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529761904762 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7016806327 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271560275997 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103187404319 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872523369291 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183523286135 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091972873232 0.0819641961636 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.2329268293 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 61.2550243902 145% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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