the diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows reasons that why people in Edmonton use their cars in city and the pie chart illustrates that what type of transport people prefer to use most of the time.

Generally, people tend to keen at using car and LRT from four vehicle. Looking at the pie chart first, it is clear that car usage is most popular means of transport for peoples in Edmonton. 45 percent of people prefer use commute by car. Interestingly, LRT account for exactly 35 percent, showing that it is second popular transport. However, Bus and taxi made up just 10 percent respectively.

The table gives more detailed information about why peoples use their car. It is certain that most of people use their cars to commute to work, exactly 55 percent. Also, main purposes of business and taking their children to school account for quiet fraction. Only 15% of people using their car Leisure activities and, similarly, people who use car in shopping is just 15 percent.

Overall, people in Edmonton use wide range of transport but there is a heavy dependence of car.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'vehicle' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'vehicles'.
Suggestion: vehicles
... to keen at using car and LRT from four vehicle. Looking at the pie chart first, it is ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...oples use their car. It is certain that most of people use their cars to commute to work, exac...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, look, second, similarly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80769230769 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47826562482 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5152221186 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5454545455 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195553785637 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917706145134 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574014174507 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142615012358 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238982627165 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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