The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton

The diagram depicts information about the four different modes of transport, and why the residents of Edmonton are using cars in the city.

Overall, around the half population of the city prefered to travel by cars, while bus and taxi are not much popular among the citizens. Numerous people are using the car for work purposes rather than shopping and entertainment activities.
To begin with, the car is the most popular vehicle in Edmonton city. 45% of people are using cars during the travelling. The second position is gotten by the light rail transit. Bus and taxi, however, both get the similar ratio only 10% of people, who are using these modes of transport.

Moreover, the population of Edmonton city use the car for various reasons. One of the major reasons is that people are commute to work by car, and just over a half of people are using cars in the city. Taking children and business are also included in the main reasons for using the car in Edmonton, yet there is a 5% difference between both reasons. Shopping and leisure activities have a similar ratio in the reasons for using the car.

Votes
Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... commute to work by car, and just over a half of people are using cars in the cit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77319587629 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42351378516 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530927835052 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0519250887 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1818181818 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357678930657 0.215688989381 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144163583088 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104389773974 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235814636507 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118358466099 0.0819641961636 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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