The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map depicts the transformation that was taken at queen Mary hospital from 1960 to 2000.
Overall, hospital had been extended during the 40 years. As well as cancer center and Nursing school were constructed for public health in Queen Mary hospital.
In 1960, as the graph shows, hospital was constructed near by main road. Meantime, shopping center located next to hospital. Car park infrastructured behind hospital as well as Farmland was next to car park.
By following 20 years, in 1980, hospital authorities bought shopping center and demolished them for extending hospital with pharmacy shop as well as they build up the cancer center near by Nursing school. Furthermore car park remained at same place.
Hospital and pharmacy located at similar place without changes in 2000. But cancer center had been expanded in L shape by reducing the nursing school. Meanwhile the size of car park had been reduced by half.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 55, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...e graph shows, hospital was constructed near by main road. Meantime, shopping center lo...
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Line 8, column 182, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...well as they build up the cancer center near by Nursing school. Furthermore car park re...
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Line 8, column 206, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...e cancer center near by Nursing school. Furthermore car park remained at same place. Hos...
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Line 10, column 152, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...L shape by reducing the nursing school. Meanwhile the size of car park had been reduced b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15789473684 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62297937003 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572368421053 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9488078417 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2727272727 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8181818182 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16506878018 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737918929466 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071510517648 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110204931887 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534417507334 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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