The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrate the development of Queen Mary Hospital from 1960 to 2000.
In 1960 hospital was built beside Shopping Centre and Car Park. The largest area wa farmland.
In 1980, Cancer Centre and Pharmacy replaced Shopping Centre. Beside the farmland disappeared and a nursing school was built at that area.
In 2000, hospital and pharmacy building were unchanged while cancer centre were extended. Nursing school and car park became smaller a half.
There were a lot of changes in hospital within 40 years. New buildings were built and extended, while some areas were disappeared and decreased size.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
The diagram illustrate the development of Queen Mary Hospital ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 33.7804878049 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 522.0 965.302439024 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 98.0 196.424390244 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32653061224 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.14634628365 3.73543355544 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4412505586 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 61.0 106.607317073 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 148.5 283.868780488 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.0308391698 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.0 112.824112599 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.8888888889 22.9334400587 47% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0880510652484 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407405901145 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04569232783 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0592669104643 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415333807184 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 12.45 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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