The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words
The bar chart give the information about the unemployment rates among women in the countries of the United Kingdom, between 2013 and 2014.
Overall, every country except in Scotland had a decrease in female unemployment rates from 2013 to 2014.
In 2013 England was a country with the highest women unemployment rate 6.8%. The second highest was Scotland with 6.1% of women unemployment rate . Next was Northern Ireland with a rate of 5.6%. The country had the smallest rate that was Wales with 5.4%.
In 2014 the female unemployment rate in countries tended to decrease while Scotland tended to increase and became a country with the highest women unemployment rate 6.7%. The percentage of unemployed women in England decrease by 0.3%, from 6.8% to 6.5%. The rate in Wales fell to 5.0%. Northern Ireland was a country with the smallest percentage 4.6%
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 716.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04225352113 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63589059213 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 62.0 106.607317073 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43661971831 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 201.6 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3162498256 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221680597532 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112959803848 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737715270309 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182032946246 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501467675318 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 40.7170731707 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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