The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen mary hospital since its construction in 1969 .
The graphs illustrate how Queen Mary hospital areas changed from 1969 to 2000.
Overall, it is noticeable that the construction of the hospital didn't change for 40 years. However, the shopping center and the farmland was replaced with cancer center and nursing school in 2000.
As can be seen obviously, although the destination of the car park was not relocated, its area was restricted to make place for nursing school after 1980. In the first 20 years, the shopping center was converted into the cancer center, while the whole farmland was cleared to make way for a new nursing school. Moreover, there was a pharmacy which was built next to the hospital in 1980 and kept in the same location until 2000. From 1980 to 2000, because of the demolishment of the school for nurses, the center for cancer treatment was developed and extended to replace the old nursing school one in order to make it bigger for using.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...e that the construction of the hospital didnt change for 40 years. However, the shopp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76729559748 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42163684047 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578616352201 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7915136391 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.285714286 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0980990317186 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695504860785 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871992290681 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12150392487 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903893290417 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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