The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
The pictures illustrate information about the biological clock of the silk worm and the steps involved in manufacturing silk materials.
Overall, it is clearly seen from the first diagram that the description of silk worm life process in four different stages. Likewise, the yielding of silk cloth through five steps has been explained in the second chart.
In case of silk worm wheel of life, it starts from delivering eggs as a first stage and off spring delivery as a fourth stage. Firstly, the matured silk worm delivers eggs on the Melbury leaf which becomes their food at the second stage which is after 10 days of span. At this point, the larvas comes out of the eggs, followed by that the well nourished larvae produces silk thread around their bodies between the duration of four to six weeks. That is called as stage 3. After that, approximately three to six days of time it creates the cocoon. Finally, from stage 4 to 16days, the larva develops their wings and body after which the moth is released from the cocoon.
On the other hand, production of silk cloth starts from selecting the cocoon. After that, it was boiled along with water. As a result of step 2, that is after boiling, each cocoon provides about three hundred to nine hundred meter threat. Then, a specific number of threats were twisted professionally and dipped in the colour for dying purpose. In order to make it as a silk cloth, the coloured threats were woven after when the silk products are ready sequentially.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'larvas'' or 'larva's'?
Suggestion: larvas'; larva's
...ter 10 days of span. At this point, the larvas comes out of the eggs, followed by that...
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Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sed from the cocoon. On the other hand, production of silk cloth starts from sel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, then, well, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 261.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75478927203 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40381077649 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 106.607317073 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570881226054 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1672607862 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6428571429 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23024563215 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847936812042 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715358769374 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136375902737 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330111467734 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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