The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the evolution progress of a salmon from the egg to an adult salmon. During their life, the salmons experience three different stages which are fry, smolt, and adult salmon in three different areas.
To begin with, a salmon egg which is laid in the upper river opens to a fry which is 3-8 centimetre long. The fry immediately moves to the lower river where contains fresh water that he will spend approximately 4 years until he reach the size of a smolt.
The second stage of the progress occurs when the middle-size salmon called the smolt migrate from freshwater area to the ocean. The smolt can reach to the length of 15 centimetre and it continuingly grow up for 5 years in the environment of saltwater.
The final stage of the salmon progressive process happens when the fish turns to its adult stage and it is in need of having offspring. The adult salmon make its final migration in life from the open sea to the upper river where it can lay the eggs into the reeds and its life cycle ends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'fried'.
Suggestion: fried
...rience three different stages which are fry, smolt, and adult salmon in three diffe...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'reaches'.
Suggestion: reaches
...ll spend approximately 4 years until he reach the size of a smolt. The second stag...
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Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rate from freshwater area to the ocean. The smolt can reach to the length of 15 cen...
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Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'centimetre' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centimetres'.
Suggestion: centimetres
...The smolt can reach to the length of 15 centimetre and it continuingly grow up for 5 years...
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Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'grows'?
Suggestion: grows
...th of 15 centimetre and it continuingly grow up for 5 years in the environment of sa...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rs in the environment of saltwater. The final stage of the salmon progressive p...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... and it is in need of having offspring. The adult salmon make its final migration i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57837837838 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42314141499 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545945945946 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.1229574073 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.875 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144869334548 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651988480199 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046853048927 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085602337698 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462845484022 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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