The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making
process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the phases and materials used for the production of cement, and the way in which cement is used to create concrete for construction purpose. There are two diagrams, the first represents cement production and the other shows how cement is used to produce concrete.
Overall, it can be seen that for production of cement, limestone and clay powder goes through several processes. Once this processes is done. The creation of concrete production starts in which cement, water, sand, and gravels are crucial materials for production of concrete.
In the first diagram, limestone and clay both these materials are crushed together to form a powder. Then, the powder passes through a mixer into the rotating heater, where the powder is heated at a high temperature. Additionally, at the end of the rotating heater there is an opening from where the powder is released out into the grinder. The fine ground powder is then packed into bags and ready for sale.
In the second diagram, for manufacturing of concrete, gravels and sand plays important role in this process. Moreover, sand and gravels constitutes at 50% and 25% respectively. Only 15% cement and 10% water is needed for concrete making. All these products are then put into a concrete mixer to form a concrete mixture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... powder goes through several processes. Once this processes is done. The creation of...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this process. Moreover, sand and gravels constitutes at 50% and 25% respectively....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ducts are then put into a concrete mixer to form a concrete mixture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09302325581 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68148308616 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525581395349 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9689634157 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2307692308 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234352675973 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880484220915 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871228601498 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16006846166 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115453442597 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.