The diagrams illustrate the design of a single and double room study area

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The diagrams illustrate the design of a single and double room study area.

The diagrams show the layout of a single room and a double room with study facilities.
Overall, although more expensive, the double room has windows and more cupboards, desks and beds than the single room.
The single room costs £200, whereas the double room is much dearer at £350 per week. While both rooms are 6m wide, the double room has a length of 4m, compared with just 2.5m for the single room.
In the single room, there are 2 bookshelves between the bathroom and kitchen, but the double room has a table outside the kitchen. Both kitchens have a stove, sink and microwave. On the opposite wall, the double room has two beds, each one by a window, compared with one bed for the single room.
In the centre of the single room, there is only a cupboard, while a study desk and a TV occupy opposite walls. In contrast, there are 2 cupboards, a TV and extra bookshelves in the middle of the double room, which has 2 study desks and a bookshelf on the other walls.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s, desks and beds than the single room. The single room costs £200, whereas the ...
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...nk and microwave. On the opposite wall, the double room has two beds, each one b...
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...pared with one bed for the single room. In the centre of the single room, there ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, whereas, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46927374302 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26613279019 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480446927374 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.199611024 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8888888889 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415992060098 0.215688989381 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211573130125 0.103423049105 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109964294932 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282475181727 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915018330599 0.0819641961636 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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