The diagrams show how the bee makes honey, and the stages in the production of honey.
The pictures demonstrate the life cycle of honeybees, and how honey is produced.
Overall, there are six stages in the life of bees, from laying egg to converting nectar into honey. In addition, there are five steps involved in the rest, beginning with removing honeycomb and finishing with distributing and selling.
In terms of the life cycle of bees, at the first stage of the process, the queen bee lays egg in a honeycomb. Secondly, this egg turns into larva three days later, and it fully grows a week later. After three more weeks, the bee leaves the hive and once it collects nectar from the flower, the nectar is left in the hive, where the honey is then made.
In order to make honey, first, the honeycomb is removed from the hive by the beekeeper. Next, it is put into a machine to extract honey. The honey gets clean by boiling, before it is poured into honey jars. Finally, those honey jars are delivered, so people can buy them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62352941176 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27046631797 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6431068921 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297001968803 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121719401631 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724016067762 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177489598508 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740017227011 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.