The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made.
The drawing illustrates the main stages which take place in the process of making tomato ketchup.
Overall, there are fifteen steps in the process, beginning with harvesting tomatoes and ending with using tomato ketchup as a flavor with some dishes.
At the beginning of the process, tomatoes are picked and put in a basket by the farmer. After that, they are divided into two groups: bad and good tomatoes so that the quality of the ketchup can be ensured. At this point, good tomatoes are sent to the factory by a lorry, where they are removed some unnecessary parts, including removing stalk, seeds, and skin. Once the tomatoes are stored in a container, they are crushed to become liquid. Subsequent to that, sugar, vinegar and salt are added. The following step is that the liquid is boiled and then left for two hours in order to get the right temperature.
At the tenth stage of the process, after making tomato ketchup, it is poured into bottles and then labelled. Before packaging, they are checked to control the quality. Following this, they are loaded onto boxes, and delivered to the supermarket to sell. The final step is that you buy a bottle of tomato ketchup, and serve it with chips and hamburger.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: SUBSEQUENT_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'after'
Suggestion: After
...ner, they are crushed to become liquid. Subsequent to that, sugar, vinegar and salt are added...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81516587678 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38049658664 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563981042654 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9066835711 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6666666667 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178345551655 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671575772924 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539516536017 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123675034439 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00932675143816 0.0819641961636 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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