the diagrams show how the bee makes honey, and the stages in the production of honey. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features
The figures show the steps of making honey by bees and the stages of honey production. There are several stages to produce honey from laying eggs by queen bee to distributing and selling the honey.
First of all, the queen bee lays the egg in the honeycomb. After long for three days, the larva emerged from the eggs and fully developed in following week. The adult bees are about to leave from the hive in three days and ready to fly to the flowers and to collect the nectar. When the worker bees arrived back to the hive, they leave the nectar what becomes honey later.
In order to produce the honey, the beekeepers take the honeycomb from the hive. And then, put the honeycomb into the machine to extract the honey. To get the clean honey, it’s needed to boil the honey and when the honey is melted, the beekeeper can easily remove the dust.
At the final, the product, honey is distributed and sold in the market with jar where the pure honey is sat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t with jar where the pure honey is sat.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45762711864 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0486907151 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.8988584177 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.9 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32375987084 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1443200863 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117574742283 0.0843802449381 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218866110146 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11324007184 0.0819641961636 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.