The diagrams show the life circle of a species of large fish called salmon.
The diagrams describe a complete life span of the salmon from birth to adult life.
Overall, salmon’s life cycle consists of main three phases from spawn to adult. It takes approximately 10 years to fulfill a cycle and reproduce new generation.
Initially, eggs hatch and baby salmons are brought to life. These young fishes are called fry of which size fluctuates between 3 and 8 cm. The fry inhabits in lower river where has fast flowing current for about 4 years. Then, fry has transformed into smolt. Size range of smolt is from 12 to 15 cm, almost triples its younger version. At this stage of life, smolt leaves river and immigrate to the open sea. Here, it spends roughly 5 years of lifetime before fully growing to adult. Full size of adult salmon is relatively large, it can be measured more or less than range 70 to 76 cm.
At this point, the critical period in life cycle of salmon begins. Salmon returns to the original place in order to perform reproduction. At upper river where experiences slow moving water, salmon lays eggs on small stones which are covered by reeds. In this spot, the eggs are sheltered from predators and they remain here for about 5 to 6 months. Finally, fry is produced and a new generation will keep repeating the cycle.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, then, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65625 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39860965654 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647321428571 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.6572760003 43.030603864 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.1875 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.0 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9375 5.23603664747 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185620768685 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601616461146 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699744497097 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131432198222 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668951464356 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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