The diagrams show the stages and equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is used to produce the concrete for building purposes.
The given diagrammatic representations revels the information about the production of cement by following distinct steps as well as equipments, and conversion of cement into concrete for building purposes. It is clear and coherent representation.
It can be seen that, mixture of both limestone and clay is converted into cement by following four distinct stages: Crushers, Mixer, Rotating heater and Grinder, but concrete is prepared by using four materials: cement, water, sand and gravel in fixed proportions.
It is crystal clear that, in the production of cement, first step involves the crushing of limestone and clay by using crusher, then the obtained powder has been passed into mixer for proper mixing. Later on, the mixer output is passed through the rotating heater in which heat is supplied then, the final blend is passed through the crusher to get a fine powder of cement. Finally, after grinding process, the cement has been packed into bags, and ready for sale.
Moving further, for production of concrete for cement four materials: water, cement, sand and gravel are used in the proportions of 10%, 15%, 25% and 50% respectively, and these materials are put together in the concrete mixture which is rotating in clockwise direction. Concrete is obtained as the end product.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and and gravel in fixed proportions. It is crystal clear that, in the productio...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...roper mixing. Later on, the mixer output is passed through the rotating heater in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25480769231 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77602914841 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543269230769 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.82561546 43.030603864 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.625 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304078206934 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129438835868 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081690534732 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194638017815 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337760583888 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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