Essay topics:
Expenditure of 2 countries on consumer goods in 2010
The chart illustrates the amount of money spent on five consumer goods (cars,computers,books,perfume and cameras) in France and UK IN 2010. Units are measured in pounds (sterling).
Overall, the UK spent more money on consumer goods than France in the period given.
Votes
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , computers
... money spent on five consumer goods cars,computers,books,perfume and cameras in France and...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , perfume
...five consumer goods cars,computers,books,perfume and cameras in France and UK IN 2010. U...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 33.7804878049 21% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 223.0 965.302439024 23% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 42.0 196.424390244 21% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30952380952 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.54572989502 3.73543355544 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.18919082018 2.65546596893 158% => OK
Unique words: 28.0 106.607317073 26% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 65.7 283.868780488 23% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4722126897 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3333333333 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217314992776 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124074043399 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903373017253 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17393996272 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142005858568 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 10.0 40.7170731707 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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