the expenditure on fast food by income groups, UK 1990.
The graph g The line graph gives information about the number of people, who suffered from X disease, lived in someland over a 35-year period from 1960 to 1995.
overall, it is clear that the number of cases of X disease which was reported in this graph rose dramatically until 80s, before dropping to zero in 1990.
At the beginning of the period, only 100 people contracted the disease. Also for next 5 years, this figure remained constant for 5 years at 300 cases at same level. after 1965 a fivefold increase was reported and the number of cases of X disease boomed by 400 cases, reached to a peak of 500 in 1975 before standing at this level for 5 years.
The condition was getting significantly better in the following period, with the number of cases of X disease dropping to zero. Between 1990 and 1995, no cases was not reported in this area.ives information about the number of people catching x-disease in someland over a 10-year period From 1983-1992.
overall, the proportion of infected people during 1983-85 remaind stable. despite of an increase trend during 1986-87,a decrease was seen in 1988. after a fluctuation, the number of those suffering from this disease dropped swiftly.
Between 1983 and 85, the proportion of individuals getting disease in remained stable at 100. despite of some upward trend during 1985-87,this figure reduced to same level of the beginning year.
In 1989,the situation in some land regarding x-disease became worse, with the number of patients reaching it's peak at 400. A gradual decrease was seen during 1989-91 before dropping quickly to zero at the final year of graph.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 33.7804878049 201% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 965.302439024 145% => OK
No of words: 275.0 196.424390244 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10181818182 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56730878162 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512727272727 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 283.868780488 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 3.36585365854 327% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.724359374 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.214285714 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.64285714286 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0162181839377 0.215688989381 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00637644653409 0.103423049105 6% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0156548478269 0.0843802449381 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.010979434705 0.15604864568 7% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180152250081 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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