Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believe that people, who do not use public education system, do not have to pay a part of their tax which belongs to educational part. I completely disagree with this view.
There are several reasons, why all people should pay tax completely. First, we can calculate easily how amount of people’s tax are allocated to state public schools. To solve this complex issue, governments should hire many professional staff. So, it is not worthwhile. Second, government costs money, which is earned from tax, in different sections, including build hospital, police expenditure, transport services and other public facilities. if government gave a discount to tax of people who send their children to private school, other people who do not use of other public facilities , public hospital for instance, would protest that should be given tax reduction them. it can cause a riot in society.
In my opinion, we all should be happy to pay our tax completely even if we do not send our children to state public schools. A good educational system forms the framework for productive and prosperous nation. societies need to have good citizens, who do not commit crimes. we can reach this goal via promote educational system. even wealthy families, who own their business, need to hire professional staff. These people should be educated in schools and collage in order to enter to work market. Therefore, a good educational system can help people to will be useful for themselves and others who pay tax while do not use of public equipment.
In conclusion, government should not dispense a part of people’s tax due to they do not use of public education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14492753623 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80728576976 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.035797795 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5294117647 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326634667316 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104298456015 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691785863053 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212678052426 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805124954451 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.