The bar chart compares the smoking behavior of UK people from 16 to 74 years old by six age group.
It is evident that smoking pattern of UK population has significantly dependence on age. The majority of British citizens are non-smokers while the others have a tendency to quit smoking when they are getting older.
Regarding non-smoker group, the youngest group takes up the largest proportion, with more than 60%, as opposed to the elderly group having less than 50% of not smoking individuals.In addition, the segment of heavy smoker of these two groups is comparatively low, with around 5%. The highest heavy smoker rate falls on two middle-aged groups, reaching approximately 12% for 35-44 year-old people and around 15% for people aged 45-54 .
According to the figure, the ex-smokers are predominantly older. The ex-smokers account for roughly a quarter of 55 to 64 aged people and nearly a half of whom aged 65 or older. Meanwhile, the younger groups tend to consume tobaco. Therefore, the light smoker rates in the two youngest groups was highest at about 25% and 32% respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, therefore, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03296703297 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81929086252 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67032967033 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8242699033 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.777777778 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0957984482133 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505763642617 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561345594314 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751022298282 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361391652231 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.