The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The first pie chart depicts the amount of energy in australian domestic work.While,the second pie chart provides us information about how the greenhouse gas produced.
Overall,it can be observed that the maximum energy used by heating and water heating.While,greenhouse gas produced by the highest contribution of water heating and other appliances.
To begin with, australian domestic energy used by the heating was highest(42%) which was followed by water heating(30%).Whereas,other appliances accounted for 15%.Which was half of water heating.However, the refrigeration was around on forth of it(7%).On the other hand, the cooling used the least which comprised of 2% and lightning was double of it(4%).
On the other hand, the water heating contributed almost half of the segment (around 32%).While, other appliances produced oje third of it (28%). Whereas, the Co2 produced by heating was half of the water heating and refrigeration was mere of 1%.Whereas, cooling and lighting produced the least (3% and 8%)respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, third, whereas, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63636363636 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.70501066999 2.65546596893 140% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519480519481 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2455385865 43.030603864 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.6 112.824112599 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.8 5.23603664747 321% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179864560312 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103871810429 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100903186941 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129839763037 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096721991323 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.2329268293 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 61.2550243902 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 11.4140731707 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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