Five countries birth rate
The bar graph reports the number of children born in five countries namely Thailand, Spain, Somalia, Mexico, and India during the specific years of 1970 and 2000.
Overall, in 1970, the birth rate was considerably higher than in the year 2000. In addition, Thailand and Spain had the highest recorded birth rate in the year 1970, whereas the most consistent one was Somalia with the same birth rate in both the years. Finally, Mexico had the least birth rate in the year 2000.
First of all, in the year 1970, the country with the lion’s share of birth rate was Thailand and after that with a difference of 4 million Spain occupies the second spot. Mexico comes in third place, at 3.6 million, whereas India and Somalia take forth and five-place, at 3.2 million and 3.1 million respectively.
According to the bar chart, India was the only country whose birth rate increased from 3.1 million to 3.3 million when considering both years, and it had the largest share in birth date during the specific year 2000. Moving on, Somalia and Thailand had almost the same amount of birth rate in the year 2000. In the last, Spain and Mexico sitting at the bottom place, at 2.2 million and 1.2 million respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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The bar graph reports the number of chil...
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...2 million and 1.2 million respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, third, whereas, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78672985782 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26008219299 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469194312796 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6896541384 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.222222222 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339280473956 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164559451446 0.103423049105 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081339118297 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213933050421 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571752788347 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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