The flow chart below shows the procedure to get a driving license in the US Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The flow chart below shows the procedure to get a driving license in the US. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram gives information about the steps that must be taken to obtain a driving license in the US.

Generally speaking, the whole process is divided into three parts, which starts by going to the driving license center to take three different kinds of test. US people have to pass all these examinations before officially holding the license.

Regarding the first phase, after arriving at the license center, all candidates have to fill in the forms; then they must have their eyesight checked carefully. People who are not qualified will gain no license.

Only those who pass the vision test are permitted to the next stage which involves paying fees to take the writing test. Each applicant has two chances to retake this test in case they fail; otherwise, they have to spend more money to do it again.

Just by passing the written examination can the person proceed to the final practical test, which is driving the vehicle on the road. This time, candidates have solely one opportunity to perform it; failure even at the first try means that more fees has to be paid. Upon succeeding this step, ultimately, the person will obtain the official driving license.

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Average: 6.1 (8 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, so, then, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93467336683 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34550127433 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633165829146 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2777012812 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0759172672789 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337767031456 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044426824762 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0552619479259 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542085789076 0.0819641961636 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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