The flow chart below shows the procedures to get a driving license in US

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The flow chart below shows the procedures to get a driving license in US.

The process provided depicts the procedure in which a driving license is got in US.
Overall, it is evident that the process consists of 6 main stages, which commences at going to the driving license center and culminates in getting the driving license.
As can be seen from the process given, the first stage is that the candidate visits the driving license center before filling in the forms in order to take an eyesight test. The result of this eyesight test determines whether the candidate passes to the next stage or fails to get the license. In the third stage, the candidate pays fee for the next 2 required exams.
As far as the process is concerned, the following stage is that the candidate has the written exam at first. The candidate goes through the road exam afterwards if he passes the previous written exam, whereas if the candidate fails at the written exam, he still has 2 more chances to retake this exam without paying any additional fee. In the last stage, the candidate gets the driving license after passing both written and practical exams. Nevertheless, if the candidate is unable to pass the written exam 3 times or the road exam just once, he has to pay fee which aims to retake these 2 exams.

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Average: 7.2 (3 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, nevertheless, still, third, whereas, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64516129032 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38780837391 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497695852535 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7192825076 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144306727659 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858308122314 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993092085357 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146535742653 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975932781478 0.0819641961636 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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