More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.
In this day and age, an increasing number of people are concerned about the excessive use of private cars. This essay will discuss the main dilemmas associated with this phenomenon and propose some possibles measures to avoid them.
The first prime issue is that the emissions from cars advesrely impact the environment. In other words, it is the exhausted fumes emitted into the air from cars that escalate the level of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. As a consequence, this will lead to global warming. Another problematic dispute is traffic jam. This means that due to cheaper options and better financial support compared to the past, there is a dramatic growth of people owning a car. For instance, since there are potentially more cars on the road, there is always a high chance of traffic congestion during peak hours in the morning and also in the afternoon. Traffic jam, therefore, becomes a source of frustration for people in many developing cities nowadays.
There are some effective resolutions to the problems of over-reliance on cars. One possible way to deal with this issue is for the government to spend more budget on upgrading the current public transports. As a result, this can lead to the increase in the frequency of ttravelling by public means of transport. Another feasible action would be for the government to implement supporting policies throughout the country. The government, for instance, can cut down the price of bus tickets or train fares, which is one of the most convincing reasons to persuade people to use these transports.
In conclusion, improving infrastructure, public transports and implementing supporting policies are effective in dealing with the issue. If governments implemented these remedies, the dependence on private cars would soon decline. Also, society must ensure steps are taken to prevent this problem from deteriorating further. Only by doing so, can the society and environment maintain dynamic and sustainable development.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26729559748 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91136042777 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3206107316 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0555555556 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221086220631 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610219478444 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460998089942 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118999684963 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418408796138 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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