Many people think that fast food companies should not be allowed to advertise while others believe that all companies should have the right to advertise? What is your opinion?
Although it is commonly believed that junk meal production industry ought not be permitted to give advertisements, other people think that advertising is an essential method for companies to promote their products to consumers. From my perspective, all firms should have the right to advertise as it has distinct advantages for both the consumers and society.
On the one hand, it is often thought that all businesses should have the right to advertise their products and I agree. In other words, advertisements offer a wide range of choices for consumers. Advertisements, for instance, provide vital information about the products and the advantages of purchasing them. Likewise, consumers, when they are not sure which product best suits their requirements, can be informed by advertisements and buy the required items. In addition, allowing every corporations to have the right to advertise not only gives information about desired products but also increases the creation of job opportunities as more professionals are needed to create advertisements. As a consequence, it would result in a better economy level and benefit our community.
On the other hand, it is considered by some that fast-food enterprises should not be permitted to advertise. In other words, people believe that promotion of fast-food will proportionally increase health related concerns in the society. Junk food industry, according to a recent survey taken place in the University of Oxford, attracts the customers by various manipulating techniques such as mouth-watering brochures, special discounts and free home delivery services. These forged policies, therefore, grab grab people to avail irrespective facility of their needs. Moreover, youngsters are more inclined to avail ready-made food because of their sedentary lifestyle. Thus, excessive use of non-organic products is a leading cause of various ailments, such as obesity or heart attack, which develop undue pressure on the health system of the country.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, I think that allowing all companies to advertise has a positive impact consumers and society since it is a straight pathway to get attention from the buyers and smooth conduction of their business matters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52161383285 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15257706022 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582132564841 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3283143945 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.733333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7333333333 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343283203637 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103823684128 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857340075151 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205631722377 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602283946617 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.