Should arts-related entertainment venues such as museums and art galleries be free of charge for the general public, or should a charge apply for admittance? Discuss this issue, and give your opinion
Although it is commonly believed that governments should not charge for visiting art galleries and museums, other people think that there should be entrance fees for the citizens. From my perspective, there should be no admission charges to the public to visit these venues.
On the one hand, it is often thought that museums and galleries should have no entrance fees and I agree. In other words, making the visits to cultural museums and historical monuments free would give the chance to destitute people to acknowledge their heritages as they do not earn enough money to pend on these stuffs. In addition, free trips should be organized by educational institutions; therefore, the children would get to know about their invaluable patrimony. Take some museums in Vietnam as a prime example, there is no fee to visit these museums for children under 18. As a consequence, the youth can come and see this proud symbol of freedom.
On the other hand, it is considered by some that museums and art galleries should charge visitors. This means that art-related venues, if they are free, people will simply not understand the importance of it. Subsequently, the primary idea of promoting arts may be lost. Many people, for instance, come to some art galleries just to spend time with their friends; therefore, people who truly want to discover the paintings may constantly be distracted by those who come for entertainment. Adding further, entrance fees help art venues to cover running costs. More specifically, any museum has a great number of maintenance expenses such as cleaning, air-conditioning, paying salaries and regularly painting.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, I think that visits to museums and art galleries shoube be free for the general public since government should provide equal opportunity to every class to see and proud of their culture, even though funds are required to maintain and preserve the fine artworks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.134375 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79884009178 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56875 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1614865694 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.357142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399879576184 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134903402681 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846014334386 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255804933863 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765418624115 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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