Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, an increasing number of people are concerned about the connection between nations in the world. I completely agree with the idea that people of all ages who live in different cultures can come together through music, since music plays an important role in creating the union and sympathetic of humanity.
First, it goes without saying that people who have the same music tastes can feel the harmony in their souls. It is music that creates no border or barriers between regions and ages; thus, if people understand and have the same feelings for a number of songs, they can have a closer-knit relationship. Take young people nowadays as a prime example, they prefer going to live concerts, where they can be part of the music and atmosphere in order to sing and dance with strangers. In addition, music can be a bridge which composers use to put their thoughts and feelings so as to connect with their listeners. Michael Jạckson, for instance, used to compose a song called "Heal the world" with the purpose to call for actions to stop creating wars between countries around the world. As a consequence, this song is used as a method of propaganda to ask for people to share hands and make the world better.
That is not to say that music always brings people closer, as not all persons are musically inclined. In other words, sports have been proven a reasonable doubt to unite various people across the world. According to a recent survey taken place in the University of Oxford, the Olympic game usually held bi-annually brings people from different continents together.
In conclusion, I would argue that people who come from different ages and cultures can have a conversation and gather together by music as it has no boundary in music. Only by doing so, can people collaborate with each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, thus, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83174603175 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58318691219 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5564713579 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.076923077 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292232779569 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118673358126 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808491890559 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216812906627 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625434866656 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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