The chart shows the percentage of car manufacturer s total sales in North America South America Europe and Asia

Essay topics:

The chart shows the percentage of car manufacturer's total sales in North America, South America, Europe and Asia.

The bar chart provided depicts the proportion of car manufacturing company's total sales in 4 different continents over a period of 5 years from 2006 to 2010.
Overall, it is evident that the portion of car manufacturer's total sales in South America witnessed a plummet from 2006 to 2010, whereas the opposite was true of the remaining continents.
As can be seen from the bar chart given, there was a slight rise of the percentage of car manufacturing firm's total sales in Asia between 2006 and 2007 before a stability at about 34% from 2007 to 2008. The figure for Asia gradually surged and reached a peak of almost 50% in 2010. The figure for Europe witnessed a leap between 2006 and 2008, which ranked in the first in 2008 with merely 38%, and then minimally decreased to approximately 30% from 2008 to 2010.
As far as the bar chart is concerned, the proportion of car manufacturer's total sales in South America between 2006 and 2007 slightly slipped before reaching a plateau at about 23% until 2009 and then it crashed to almost 9% in 2010. The figure for North America gradually dipped to merely 5% from 2006 to 2009 and minimally increased again to approximately 11% in 2010.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67942583732 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67855419862 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492822966507 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.5302184015 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.714285714 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8571428571 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316919864161 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153906385325 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089600648586 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21398833853 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515391604424 0.0819641961636 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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