More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation.
Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
We live in an age when many of us prefer the usage of privately owned vehicles over any public transport, as our primary mode of transportation. This increasing usage of private vehicles is associated with some major issues that we are facing today. This essay will examine some problems related to this and also the possible solutions if any.
A privately owned vehicle is a much more luxurious mode of transportation than any other. But heavy usage of private vehicles has also brought various problems. The main problem is the amount of air pollution they can spread, for instance, we have witnessed many times the toxic fumes coming out of the exhaust pipe of a running vehicle, which adds in polluting air. Traffic congestion is also an issue that we face today, for example, if everyone is about to prefer private vehicles, then traffic on the roads will be astonishingly higher. Moreover, the rate of consumption of fossil fuels will get even faster which will lead to the extinction of it much earlier, a potential threat on its own. What is more, not traveling through public transport can greatly impact the livelihood of people working in it, as there will be no jobs left in this particular field.
Well, there is always a solution to every problem in this world, you just have to make little effort for it. There are possible solutions that must be implemented to prevent us from facing these issues in our daily life. Governments must run various campaigns, spreading awareness among people about the potential threats which are related to the extreme usage of private vehicles and must be encouraging them to prefer public transport instead. For instance, in the city of Delhi, a law was imposed to bring out only the oddly numbered cars for one particular day and even on the next day. This helped a lot in maintaining the traffic around. Every family must not buy a separate private car for all of its members, which purely exaggerate these problems, this is also squandering of money.
To conclude, there are some potential issues that arise due to the heavy usage of privately owned vehicles. However, we can include some solutions in our daily life to stay away from these problems like everyone must try to commute themselves through public transport over using private cars and owning one car for a family of three to four would be enough to be pragmatic.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, for instance, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83618581907 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56158418248 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525672371638 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6139011671 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.352941176 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0588235294 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220412738057 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718766830162 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506532308413 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149202420024 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346729191877 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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