The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented diagram describes the life cycle of a salmon fish, from incubation to its adulthood. This life cycle is mainly divided into two stages (river and ocean).
The overall life cycle of a salmon fish is further divided into eight smaller stages. A new life cycle of a salmon begins when an egg is being laid by the other matured salmon fish.
Whilst in the river stage, the eggs are laid by the other matured fishes, in the spawning areas, which begin the incubation stage. The eggs are then hatched as the new stage of emergence starts, subsequently, these newly emerged salmons then swim in the river water, this stage is called fresh water rearing. Before moving towards the ocean, salmons swim and nurture themselves in the estuary water this stage is called estuary rearing.
The ocean stage begins with the ending of estuary rearing. Firstly salmons try to migrate to rearing areas for their further growth and matureness. Upon reaching the rearing areas in the ocean, salmons stay there as long as they are not fully grown and become adults. Following this, the next stage is to migrate towards spawning areas, in order to do this they revert themselves back to rivers for laying the eggs. Thus, starting over the whole process again for their offspring.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, then, thus, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8623853211 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17987906499 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536697247706 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7598906788 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165985622649 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763700949364 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849956310667 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142493350027 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106312606036 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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