The flow chart shows the detailed process of using digital technology to produce digital pictures, including the role of digital camera,smart card, computer and finally the photo printer.
The flow chart show the process of producing digital technology to produce photographs.
Overall,it was clearly evident that the taking photograph using digital equipment has three major stages with several substances. The process commence with capturing image and end at greeting the photo.
To embark with, digital camera through capture the images. After that, photos are recorded in smart card. Following this,this kind of images and recording videos are downloaded in internal storage. Subsequently, computer through all the photos are edit like cutting enhancing and it is put in new format.
Next,this format is send via emails. Consequently,those are stored in hard disk. Then, photo paper through printer is start and work is on. In next step, there are two kind of photo copies available. Additionally,the first is color copy and the second is black and white copies. Lastly,grey scale is used in normal copies(black and white).
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , it
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
...work is on. In next step, there are two kind of photo copies available. Additionally...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kind' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kinds'.
Suggestion: kinds
...work is on. In next step, there are two kind of photo copies available. Additionally...
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...second is black and white copies. Lastly,grey scale is used in normal copiesblack and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, lastly, second, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47619047619 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85905345901 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.727891156463 0.547539520022 133% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6900045029 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.9230769231 112.824112599 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.3076923077 22.9334400587 49% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302620330443 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903867021239 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120871998916 0.0843802449381 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205834875352 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15448336917 0.0819641961636 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.32 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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