The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory Write a report for a university tutor describing the production process

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The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory.

Write a report for a university tutor describing the production process.

The flowchart illustrates the process of how to produce colored paper clips in a small factory. Overall, there are five steps involved in the process, beginning with selecting the material molten plastic and ending with sending the product of clips out from the factory by packing and despatch.

To begin, molten plastic is poured into moulds distinguished three different colors; which are red, blue and yellow. Moving to the second step, these clips are then checked for strength in a quality control system. Also, at this step, the machine will reject unsatisfactory clips. In the third step, workers in the factory sort all these clips manually by hand, putting mixed coloured clips in a group and single coloured clips into another group. After the third step is completed, two types of coloured clips will be checked again in a quality control system to make sure that they are put into groups correctly. Finally, the process ends by packing and delivery to markets.

Votes
Average: 8.1 (206 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, second, so, then, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02469135802 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39855923832 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4209869151 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241390534822 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102223486696 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103294773383 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214081821955 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947500583836 0.0819641961636 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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The given flowchart explains how coloured plastic paper pins are produced in a small factory.
Overall, the production of plastic pins is a complex process involving 6 main steps beginning with melting the plastic an culminating with despatching them to the markets.
The process initiates with melting the plastic with the help of heat to make it malleable. The molten plastic is then separated according to its color, for example red mould, blue mould and yellow mould. Each mould is then passed through quality check for strength with the help of a machine. The low quality material is then rejected. The selected mould is sorted manually into single colour and mixed colors whuch is again passed though quality control to check if separation of colours is done efficiently,
Lastly, the plastic pins are then packed and dispatched for sale.