The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.

Essay topics:

The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.

The table shows the percentage of children born to women aged 40–44 years in Australia from 1981 to 2006. Overall, it is clear that the proportion of women who had three or more children decreased, while the number of those who had three children and no child increased among ages 40-44 years.

In 1981, close to 27% of women aged 40-44 years who had given a birth to 3 or more children. However, the number of women who had given birth to 4 or more children dropped significantly to 11% in 2006, while the figure for those who have had only three children remained stable by 1986 before a slight drop to 21% in 2006.

Regarding from the table, throughout the period of 15 years, the number of women in their early forties who had 2 children was highest, at 29%. This figure had then risen steadily to 38% by the end of this period. Similarly, the percentage of women who were childless and had 1 children grown gradually from 8% and 7% to 16% and 13% respectively.

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Average: 6.7 (3 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ercentage of children born to women aged 40–44 years in Australia from 1981 to 20...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'regarding', 'similarly', 'then', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231527093596 0.268076937826 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.12315270936 0.116061578633 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0443349753695 0.0759168565197 58% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0443349753695 0.0366838410393 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00985221674877 0.0131127313244 75% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133004926108 0.155750635184 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0443349753695 0.0379272487307 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41664471851 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0443349753695 0.0210936926555 210% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0886699507389 0.0948980150116 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0344827586207 0.00967000014798 357% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 974.0 1161.00487805 84% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.9 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47191011236 5.90752243213 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.23595505618 0.337110787985 70% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.168539325843 0.247514529752 68% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14606741573 0.171178102325 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0786516853933 0.112407865282 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41664471851 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550561797753 0.546246751206 101% => OK
Word variations: 47.5340386375 49.3433353143 96% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 25.4285714286 23.0094962315 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4055504031 42.9750493124 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.142857143 135.714022679 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 23.0094962315 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.689975730869 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 42.2825040128 47.7609492067 89% => OK
Elegance: 2.30555555556 2.94281807926 78% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464938809755 0.418131533498 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.212362340941 0.181151798455 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.102710436311 0.0850326197045 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.718188266385 0.706616315825 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.115756465989 0.157042692854 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.285248851297 0.228904883108 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141629575844 0.108899403657 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.462866141705 0.367819155151 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0922722193391 0.0812612215331 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.373565865643 0.316326947829 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730166106966 0.0921553760075 79% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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