The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory.

Essay topics:

The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory.

The provided flow diagram describes the process involved in the manufacturing of plastic paper clips in a small factory.

Overall, it is evident from the layout that this process consists of five important stages: molten plastic, quality control for strength, sorting, quality control for colour and dispatching.

Firstly, the molten plastic is poured in three different types of moulds; that is, red, blue and yellow. After that, the clips undergo quality control check for strength where weak clips are rejected and others are sorted by hand at the next stage.

At the stage of sorting, mix coloured and single coloured clips are separated. Further, at the next stage quality control, checks mixed and single coloured clips, and finally they are packed and dispatched for sale.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rall, it is evident from the layout that this process consists of five important ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 664.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 125.0 196.424390244 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.312 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.34370152488 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38187825046 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 190.8 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1077705865 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225736161056 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124469425265 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993528955865 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151888508565 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992528813249 0.0819641961636 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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