It is said taht adulterated food is key reason behind deterirated health of all age groups masses. How far you agree with it?
Food adulteration means addition of another harmful substance in food items in order to increase the quantity of food. Therefore, these types of food products fails to meet legal standard and quality. The given topic asserts that, is adulteration of food the main reason behind all the health problems among all age group masses. I completely agree and shall illutrate my opinion in the following paragraphs.
First type of food adulteration, intentionally food is adulterated for personal financial gain. There are many examples of intentional food adulteration like; adding chalk in sugar, colour in red chilli powder, artificial flavours in beverages and many more. Example; the most popular beverage "Real" contains artificial colour and flavour as well. It is clear from practical experiment that more than 2 kilograms of pomegranate can give out less than 1 liter of juice and costs more than 200 rupees whereas "Real" fruit juice costs only 100 rupees. So the producers add harmful substances to increase its quantity. This type of adulteration not only dimnishes product quality but causes many chronic diseases as well. The additive sugar increases blood sugar level after 20 minutes of consumption which not only causes type 2 diabetes but also damage liver as well.
Second type is intentinally adulteration, which takes place due to ignorance or lack of facilites to maintain food quality. This may be caused by spillover effects from pesticides and fertilizers. Example; many farmers excessively use pesticides and fertilizers without knowledge of their harmful aspects only to increase the productivity of crop. Unintentinal adulteration causes many fatal diseases like; cancer, heart attack, liver attack etcetera.
Last is natural adulteration, which occur due to presence of ceratain chemicals, organic compounds and radicals, naturally occuring in foids which are injurious to health and not added to food intentinally or unintentinally. Example these days youth enjoys street food which is at hidh risk in case of hygiene. Streetfoid gets contaminated by insects such as flies, mosquitos and cockroaches and many more. It causes many health problems such as food poisoning, diarohea and stomach infection durle to harmful bacteria and virus.
As we have seen there are number ic answers to this question which tend to believe taht food is necessity of life. It should be pure, nutritious and free from all type of adulteration for proper maintance because one works hard and earns to satisfy once hunger.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2159.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43828715365 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94496897894 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607052896725 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 680.4 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.967439092 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.80952381 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9047619048 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182047995738 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540983509462 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812617905234 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111101244135 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101184436047 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.