The flowchart shows how concentrated apple juice is produced.

Essay topics:

The flowchart shows how concentrated apple juice is produced.

The flowchart provide reveal information about the way of apple juice is produced.

Overall, there are 11 stages in whole of the producing process, beginning with the collected apple from farmland and ending with delivery of the juice to the market for consuming.

At the first step, the highest quality of apples are collected from garden. Then, washed, and sort in the second stage. A roller assist in this process. In the next step, Apples are sliced by the grinder before delivery to the pressure machine in order to separate water from apple concentration. After that, a chemical substance called an Aroma is added to concentration. juice after than became filter in filtration machine is exposed to a temperature of 80°C in order to pasteurization.

In the subsequent stage, the bottles which are placed on the roller, filled by the pasteurized syrups. Finally, the apple juices are packed and then, are delivered to the market for people consuming.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 374, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Juice
...led an Aroma is added to concentration. juice after than became filter in filtration ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18987341772 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75103220202 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8717088259 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216741956548 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799633595415 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990951373717 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157815717969 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10570356927 0.0819641961636 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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