The food production chain of the United States
The picture gives information about several stages of food manufacturing process in United States.
In the first stage, Agricultural activities have an integral part to supply all food products, including cereals, vegetables, livestock and fish which are produced and collected from several sectors, mainly from farmland and sea. Those raw products are sent and processed to food factories where they are scanned and sorted into ready products. Afterwards, such products are ready to be transported to distribution company.
At the distribution company, such products is transferred and supplied to several food industries such as restaurants and retailers in which In this stage these products is consumed in various ways. The products, used in restaurants, are cooked and formed into plenty types of meal before they are served to consumers in buffets, while the food products in retailers are sold directly to home consumers.
Overall, food manufacturing system of the United States has several stages, beginning with agricultural activities and distributing to different markets before food products are ready to be consumed by people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...fferent markets before food products are ready to be consumed by people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6936416185 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95079769837 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595375722543 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5467866441 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.714285714 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308046951058 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14609403686 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811436485916 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198689167533 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721800286433 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 11.4140731707 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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