The given chart demonstrates the proportion of Australian men and women in six different age groups in terms of how often they did exercises in 2010.
The given chart demonstrates the proportion of Australian men and women in six different age groups in terms of how often they did exercises in 2010.
A glance at the bar chart reveals that women tended to do physical more often than men. It is also obvious that the figure for Australian native in the age between 45 and 54 years old is the highest one.
Beginning with people who are from 15 to 24 years old, it is evident that the percentage of men is higher than women, at 52.8% and 47.7%, respectively. However, in other age groups, the rates for women doing regular physical activity are all higher than those for men. In the group of people who are 65 years old or over, two figures for men and women are nearly equal, at 46.7% and 47.1%, respectively.
It is interesting to notice from the chart that the percentage of Australian men doing exercises and that of women showed two opposite trends. The proportion of men is highest when they were from 15 to 24 years old, then reduce steadily and reach the bottom of 39.5% in the age of 35 and 44 years old, before undergoing a slight increase to 46.7% when they were in the oldest age group. In contrast, the figure for women saw a gradual growth from 47,7% to a peak of 53.5% in the age between 15 and 54 years old before falling minimally by 6.2%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'exercise'
Suggestion: exercise
...e groups in terms of how often they did exercises in 2010. A glance at the bar chart r...
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Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...n those for men. In the group of people who are 65 years old or over, two figures for m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41975308642 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35539105579 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477366255144 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.8541519113 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398802193083 0.215688989381 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205315602927 0.103423049105 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.284330991283 0.0843802449381 337% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.368325058257 0.15604864568 236% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.366009170244 0.0819641961636 447% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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