The given chart describes data of Southland's main exports in 2000, 2018 and projections for 2025

Essay topics:

The given chart describes data of Southland's main exports in 2000, 2018 and projections for 2025

The given chart describes data of Southland's main exports sectors which are international tourism, dairy products and meat products in three major years as 2000, 2018 and predictions for 2025.
In term of international tourism, this sector stood at around 8 billion in 2000 which is the highest data compared with dairy and meat products at the same time. After that, this figure increased gradually to approximately 9 billion in 2018 and it was projected to reach around 10 billion in 2025.
Dairy's products export of Southland worth about 7 billion in 2000 and this number jumped to nearly 10 billion in the next 18 years. In contrast with dairy products sector, the money received from selling meats declined slightly from exact 6 billion to roughly 5 billion. However, Dairy and meat products experienced a slight decrease in sales from around 10 billion to 9.5 billion and from 5.5 billion to exact 5 billion respectively between 2018 and 2025.
Overall, there was an increasing trend in the money generated by international tourism and dairy products sector in 25 year period. Whereas, meat products category witness the opposite trend with the lowest data of sales in 2025

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
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Line 4, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...airy products sector in 25 year period. Whereas, meat products category witness the opp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, whereas, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03571428571 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62736278303 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55612244898 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5737954108 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.375 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207780935106 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109371485193 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137552163699 0.0843802449381 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172760048576 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166010197608 0.0819641961636 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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