It is a highly debatable issue that medical system developments result in higher life expectancy for people but also create negative impacts on their life. This essay will illustrate the reasons why drawbacks outweigh the advantages regarding to this issue.
First and foremost, in 21st century, mankind has developed an outstanding health care system which brings crucial benefits for citizens around the globe. A strong health care service ensure a healthy and productive society where most of the diseases could be detected and cured in a short time by modern technologies.For instance, the employees and the workers have a high health status and could work for a longer shift. Moreover, with technology developments people's life expectancy become longer is inevitable. Elderly people are like a book of wisdom, experiences and knowledge, lengthen their age could create positive impacts on the society. For example, longer life expectancy could generate extra time for elderly professors to finish their projects or share it with young generations.
However, there are significant disadvantages occur when people age become higher due to technology developments.Firstly, a huge amount of money spent on health care system to keep the elder live longer may cause financial shortage for another major aspects such as education, pollution or disasters. For example, tornado, tsunami or volcano active affect community in many ways and burdens the society. Secondly, population booming is a serious problem which directly affected by longer life expectancy. Our scare resources are running out due to excess population growth, more people means more water, food, medicines and space needed to manage a sufficient life. If no action was taken, the population has gone out of control for a long time.
In conclusion, there are several advantages of lengthen people life expectancy, however the disadvantages are way more serious and needed to take in our account immediately.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45488721805 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96187402192 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639097744361 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3675008093 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.909090909 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182609761455 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722194997426 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394141052826 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117954799511 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365950124678 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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