The given flow chart shows the various sources of natural gas and the way it is distributed summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The given flow chart shows the various sources of natural gas and the way it is distributed.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given chart describes the distribution flow of Natural gas and obtaining of gas from various sources.
The main sources for Natural gas are from a Gas well, Oil well and importing through ships from distant places. The distribution to regions occurs in various methods like road, rails, and pipelines etc.
After obtaining gas from its source refining process happens in Gas plants, refineries etc before reaching the main storage. Once after the gas reaches the storage it is then distributed using pipelines to banks located at different regions. Later, from these storages, it then transported through road containers and rail wagons to retail storages and further to retail consumers in small amounts.
Rail wagons are expensive and can hold a capacity of 24000 liters whereas, containers using roads have larger storage of 40,000 liters and is less costly. The transported gas is then bought to retail stores which can hold up to a capacity of 120,000 liters from where it is further distributed using small delivery trucks to retail consumers.

Votes
Average: 8.6 (6 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ting through ships from distant places. The distribution to regions occurs in vario...
^^^
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s etc before reaching the main storage. Once after the gas reaches the storage it is...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19298245614 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55391572905 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573099415205 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.24457596 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155787875004 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810589354824 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08807091218 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129847042666 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934806028136 0.0819641961636 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.