The given graph and table illustrate the average monthly degree and the total hours of daylight in three different cities included New York, London and Sydney during a year
The given graph and table illustrate the average monthly degree and the total hours of daylight in three different cities included New York, London and Sydney during a year.
It could be seen from the graph that London and NewYork experienced the familiar platform of temperatures with the warmest time from July to August.In contrast, Sydney witnessed a different pattern of degree with the coldest point stood at July and became warmer until the end of year.
NewYork city began with the temperatures around 5° in January and reached its peak at approximately 30° in July while this figure in London followed the familiar pattern with the degree increased gradually around 9° to roughly 24°. Sydney began the year with warm weather at about 25° and this data declined continuously to the coldest point in July at about 15°. In the last 6 month, there was a slightly increase in the temperatures of Sydney from roughly 15° to exact 25° which contrast with the trend of degree in NewYork and London, the temperatures decreased from 30° to around 5° and roughly 25° to 10° respectively.
As far as the hour of sunshine concerned, London occupies the smallest hours about 1180 while NewYork has the highest hours at 2535 which a little bit higher compared with 2473 daylight hours of Sydney.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...th the warmest time from July to August.In contrast, Sydney witnessed a different ...
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Line 4, column 396, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
...out 15°. In the last 6 month, there was a slightly increase in the temperatures of Sydney from roug...
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Line 6, column 141, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...k has the highest hours at 2535 which a little bit higher compared with 2473 daylight hour...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49999586777 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518181818182 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.3696795229 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.5 112.824112599 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.6666666667 22.9334400587 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363560649233 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.245081164836 0.103423049105 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.339462462338 0.0843802449381 402% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.342710906256 0.15604864568 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.380097992733 0.0819641961636 464% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.2329268293 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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