The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
The line graph compares the data about average monthly temperatures in all months from January to December in three particular cities. while the table illustrates the figures regarding the total annual hours of sunshine in these places over a 12-months period. In general, New York accounts for the highest percentage of temperature in July and the number of hours of sunshine.
It could be easily observed from the line chart that, in January, Sydney is a city that contributes to the largest proportion of average temperature, with over 25%. After that, there is a dramatic drop in this city, bottom out nearly 15%. From this year onwards, the figures tend to rise to approximately to the number, equal to that of January. About London, in the first period, January-July, the rate considerably increase to 23% and noticeably decrease to just under 10% from July to December. New York reaches a peak at 30% in July and falls rapidly to 5%.
In comparison with the data of average monthly temperatures, that of total annual hours of sunshine are completely different. New York city is the highest, with 2,535 hours compared to 1,180 in London and 2,473 in Sydney.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...to December in three particular cities. while the table illustrates the figures regar...
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Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to December in three particular cities. while the table illustrates the figures regar...
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Line 3, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...0% in July and falls rapidly to 5%. In comparison with the data of average monthly temper...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, so, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92893401015 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.724181564 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58883248731 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3440274189 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272854805991 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959578852053 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825445683129 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19450193753 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985576656979 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.