The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
Write at least 150 words.
The line chart gives information about the number of visitors in two new music websites, music choice and pop parade in internet. Overall, both figures fluctuated, with a general trend was upward. Although both figures stood at fairly different number, they had widen at the end of the period.
According to the chart, the music choice sites had reached 40,000 people in the first day, and it fell to 20,000 people in the second day. The figures increased moderately by 40,000 people in the next day, however, the next day suffered a moderate decline of 40,000 people. The figures fluctuated until the eleventh day, with a general trend was remained constant and reached around 22,000 people. Surprisingly, the number of people rocketed to 120,000 in the twelveth day, and it deteriorated to approximately 75,000 people at the end of the period.
As it can be seen, the pop parade sites stood at 120,000 people in the first day and plateaued until the third day. Unfortunately, the figures plunged in the following day, and hit a low in the seventh day, with just below 40,000 people and rose marginally at 40,000 in the next 2 days. Amazingly, pop parade sites increased dramatically to 150,000 people in the tenth day. Then, the figures fluctuated and reached a peak at just over 160,000 people, and it continue to soared to about 167,000 people in the fifteenth day.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'widened'.
Suggestion: widened
...od at fairly different number, they had widen at the end of the period. According ...
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Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'widened'.
Suggestion: widened
...od at fairly different number, they had widen at the end of the period. According ...
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Line 5, column 459, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'continues'?
Suggestion: continues
...eak at just over 160,000 people, and it continue to soared to about 167,000 people in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88034188034 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57076058656 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465811965812 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3359002133 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.818181818 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0873234513668 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465194451988 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442793743633 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792529474111 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462225894485 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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