The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030.
The line graph illustrates America’s fuel consumption from 1980 to the projection in 2030, which was reported in 2008.
Overall, it is clear that the American has consumed the largest amount of petrol and oil; whereas the use of nuclear,
solar/wind and hydropower was at the lowest throughout the period surveyed. Units are measured in quadrillion units.
In 1980, American citizens consumed 35 quadrillion units of petrol and oil; then the figure experienced a sharp fluctuation in the next 28 years before being predicted to go up to nearly 50 quadrillion units in 2030. It was followed by the use of coal and natural gas which stood at above 15 and 20 quadrillion units respectively in 1980. The consumption of the former has increased significantly until 2030 while the latter fluctuated slightly in the first 35 years and is expected to remain unchanged at around 24 quadrillion units during the remaining time.
Meanwhile, the use of nuclear, solar/wind, and hydropower stood at below 5 quadrillion units at the beginning, then the amount of nuclear used has gone up to around 8 quadrillion units, 2 quadrillion units higher than solar/ wind and approximately 5 quadrillion units higher than hydropower.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rol and oil; whereas the use of nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower was at the low...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20202020202 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07243438925 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565656565657 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.9524104196 43.030603864 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.142857143 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115285516823 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726204566349 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111009482975 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861986245505 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128815561284 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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