The graph below gives information from Annual Energy Outlook 2008 about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030.

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The graph below gives information from Annual Energy Outlook 2008 about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030.

The line graph includes information from Annual energy Outlook 2008 about consumption of energy, which is genereted from six different sources, in the US over a 32-year period from 1980 to 2012 and projected consumption until 2030. The units are measured in Quadrillion.

Overall, it is clear that most of American’s energy needs have been met by fossil fuels and predictions were done by this Institute show that this trend will continue in future.

In 1980, oil consumption in the USA stood at 35q while coal and natural gas consumed were about 17q and 20q respectively. Despite some fluctuation in the amount of oil, this source has risen by 5q. A rising of 10q is predicted for oil until 2030. while two other fossil fuels experienced fluctuated trends, both of them rose gradually, reaching the same point (roughly 25q). it is anticipated that consumption of natural gas remains at this level whereas coal will rise by nearly 5q.

At the beginning of the period, energy from Nuclear, Solar and Hydropower consumed about 4q. A gradual increase was seen in the atomic energy, with figure reaching 8q in 2012. In the future, consumption of this source will rise by 1q. An insignificant decrease had been occurred in sustainable source, before this figure falling back to 1980 figure. Now consumption of clean energy source stands under 5q and it is projected that remains under 7q in 2030.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01276595745 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71999786968 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.2016549289 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6153846154 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317710628282 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910791183775 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120975040207 0.0843802449381 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193225795967 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152586847599 0.0819641961636 186% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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