The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied line graph delineats data concerning birth and death rates inNew Yealand over a period of 200 years starting from 1901 to 2101.
As an overall trend, it is clear that the birth rate is much higher than the death one. However, in 2041, the position will be reversed, death rate is forecasted to outperform the birth one.
A closer look at the graph reveals that the birth rate, which commenced at around 20, is twice as much as the death one. Subsequently, it significanty fluctuated in diffrent years and rapid ups and downs could be observed from 1901 to 1941 then reach the vertext at well over 60 afterwards in 1961.However, the rate continued to oscillate from 50 to 65 withing a time span of 60 years and it is expected to decline notably to around 45 births at the end of the period.
When it comes to the motality rate, it started below 10 and went through a period of mild volatility in the next century. Following that it tend to soar, which is expected to overtake the position of birth just below 50 in 2041 before remaining almost static at well under 60 till the end of the given time span.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orecasted to outperform the birth one. A closer look at the graph reveals that ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...text at well over 60 afterwards in 1961.However, the rate continued to oscillate from 5...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46341463415 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42985593833 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551219512195 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.8586206765 43.030603864 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.714285714 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2857142857 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155367956403 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851139235748 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03865020162 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107312637646 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03572008108 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.18 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.