Some people work for the same organisations all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both views and give your opinion
When it comes to doing a job people are in two minds about having a steady job in a fixed corporation or working on multiple companies. While there are various merits of the former option, I would argue that it is better to have flexible jobs in several workplaces.
The option to have stable employment is appealing for some reasons. It is clear that the more time you work the more insight of the job you get. In other words, you may gradually achieve job satisfaction and being familiar with the work operation. Moreover, once you already had a reputation for your specific profession, you are possibly provided with promotion opportunities and having the ability to move up the career ladder. However promising as it seems, a stable job may cause boredom and disillusion partly due to its monotonous trait, which, in turn limiting your potential in other vocational fields.
On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for employers to work on different corporations. First of all, you may stand a chance to cultivate your knowledge as well as skills thanks to the valuable experience gained from various places of works. In the same way, there is a possibility that one may find which job suits them the best through error and trial. Another advantage of this case is financial support, which means one could benefit highly lucrative sources from an array of careers from multiple companies.
Although there are merits to working for one organization, I personally feel it is also valuable for employers to be able to acquire incredible knowledge in a range of related fields. As long as planned meticulously, I suppose that change is essential and will ultimately be advantageous to both employers and employees.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, i suppose, as well as, first of all, in other words, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9180887372 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79744418193 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58361774744 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0560106999 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.846153846 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209752329351 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769051743705 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646763972402 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11953481466 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237576705295 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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