The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The line graph illustrates and predicts the proportion of the four particular countries' city residents in Asia, namely the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia between 1970 and 2040.
Overall, it can be seen that there is an upward trend for all countries' data during a 70-year period. In addition, the proportion of Malaysia's population accounted for the highest data, except for the year in 1970 and 1990.
In 1970, the data for Indonesia's population was about 15%, while that of the Philippines and Malaysia nearly doubled, at 30%. While there was a slight rise in the percentage of Thailand, from 19% to 25% in 2000, Malaysia witnessed a significant growth during this 30-year period, at 60%. In 2020, The figure for Malaysia was still the highest, at 75%, followed by Indonesia and the Philippines, at 55% and 49% respectively.
In terms of predictions, Thailand's city dwellers percentage is expected to increase to 40% in 2030 and 50% in 2040, which is lower than Indonesia and the Philippines at the same time, at about 52% and 60% respectively. Meanwhiles, the prediction of Thailand is the highest of the four countries, at approximately 85% at the end of the period.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...n that there is an upward trend for all countries data during a 70-year period. In additi...
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Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'dwellers'' or 'dweller's'?
Suggestion: dwellers'; dweller's
...In terms of predictions, Thailands city dwellers percentage is expected to increase to 4...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, still, well, while, except for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0404040404 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96947363965 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560606060606 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 3.36585365854 357% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5133309638 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.75 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230310567525 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105679310012 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548901747515 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146412231876 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434522207904 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.